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四级写作题目一：
Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your hometown. What is the place would you show him or her and why?
四级写作题目二：
Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your campus. What is the place would you show him or her and why?
四级写作题目三：
Suppose a foreign friend of yours in coming to visit your China. What is the place would you show him or her and why?
与去年的图画作文模式不同，今年又重新回到了话题作文的形式，并且所给话题也是考生非常熟悉的，很容易展开思路。更令人惊奇的是今年的作文虽然有三个话题，但是话题设定的背景信息是趋同的，都是说外国朋友要来中国或来你的家乡或来你的学校，让你介绍一下中国/家乡/学校的特色，目的还是为了推介我们本土的'文化特色，看来出题人是越来越看重中国传统文化的弘扬了。去年的翻译题当中就出现了一系列的对中国传统文化的介绍，像中餐，中国结，茶文化，中国园林，中秋等等。所以说，文化题材，特别是有关中国文化特色的题材要成为以后大家复习的重点内容。
对于6月份外国友人来你的家乡，请给他推荐一个地方并说明原因的真题。写法趋向于说明文，介绍一个地点，其实并不难写，只是出乎意料，让大家措手不及。范文参考如下，另外两个题目外国友人来你的国家和你的校园，写法也可参照于此，把地点换掉即可。
参考范文：
If my foreign friend comes to my hometown, I will take her to the Central Avenue .When it comes to the reasons why I choose this place, they can be briefly summed up as below.
To start with, Central Avenue is a symbol of Harbin, which has a long history. There are European-style buildings in mounting numbers along the street, attracting a great many tourists to take photos with them. Moreover, a variety of delicious foods are tempting. Taking a look around, I can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be ice-cream brick of Ma Dieer. Finally, brilliant historic culture can widen vision and enhance knowledge, laying a solid foundation for the understanding of this fabulous city.
Harbin is a city full of vitality and energy. I believe my foreign friend will enjoy her days here. Not only can she appreciate the landscape of the Songhua River but also taste authentic northeast food. No better place can be chosen than Central Avenue!
关于中国的范文：中国(China)
As one of the most bewitching and international cities in China, I strongly recommend you, my dearest friends, to pay a visit to my hometown-Beijing. It is the capital of China for several dynasties over a long period. In the meantime, it has now evolved into the political, cultural and educational center. There are many places of interests here in Beijing, among which the Summer Palace is the most interesting attraction.
The Summer Palace is situated in the western outskirts of Beijing, and it is one of the most classical gardens in China, which enjoys a worldwide reputation. The most alluring scenery is Kunming Lake, with an exquisite building in the middle, and it involves three parts which are mainly used as the ancient empress’s living quarter.
I’m sure you can definitely experience the characteristic and traditional culture of China. Hope you could enjoy your trip!
关于家乡的范文：桂林(Guilin – A Beautiful City in China)
In China, there's a saying that ”The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven.“ In light of this, I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.
Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent.
Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery. From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.
I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.
关于家乡的范文：豫园(Yu Garden)
If a foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown, Shanghai, I would like to take her to Yu Garden.
Yu Garden is a traditional Chinese garden located beside the City God Temple in the northeast of Shanghai. Here she will marvel at the exotic and exquisite beauty of the Chinese Garden. She can walk on the crooked bridge and take photos of the beautiful goldfish. Besides, she can taste the local cuisines like steamed buns, wonton noodles, soy milk. There are a variety of mouth-watering snacks there. Apart from the beautiful scenery and delicious food, she will also be attracted by the remarkable performance of different craftsmen. For example, she will see Shanghai-style paper-cutting, and the process of making Chinese candy and clay figurines.
I believe my friend will have a great day if she visits Yu Garden. This is a place where the features of this city are combined.
人才流失
1) 中国人才流失的现状；
2) 对人才流失的看法；
3) 如何解决人才流失。
这次的写作都得是记叙文的形式，这让我们都很意外。以前他会让你分析一种现象，而这次却出了一个很早期考过的题。如果单从难度上讲，他属于偏而不难，他的本质肯定是我们学习过的东西。
这类题是雅思托福当中的口语题，我们常说六级的今天是四级的`明天，而雅思托福的今天是六级的明天。对于我们来说，这道题难度并不是很高。
开头，不要写成书信
这次的题目，首先你要明确一点，这道题并不是要求你写书信的形式，而是如果一个你的外国朋友来到中国，你想去推荐他去哪的文章，所以审题一定要想清楚。
中间段，介绍原因，万能理由
我们推崇的并不是语言模板，而是思维模板。在这次的作文中，我们想理由可以从便捷、环境、健康、经济等等几个方面入手。
便捷：
It is convenient for us to…
环境：
pleasant environment
健康：
benefits our physical and psychological health
举个例子：
你可以推荐外国朋友来学校的图书馆玩，为什么呢？你想理由的时候可以说图书馆离超市近，离公交站近，生活和出行都很便捷；同时图书馆中的很好的学习环境，氛围安静；而图书馆又是个阳光充足的地方，在那边待一下午对身体健康有好处，等等，都可以往这方面原因上靠。
千万不在被现象所蒙蔽，因为现象千变万化，不要因为你没准备过就被吓到了，但内在的内容原因的分析是，方法是万变不离其宗的。
结尾：总结并呼吁
首先进行总结
All in all…
在我们分析社会现象的时候总爱干一件事，那就是呼吁，在这篇文章里我们照样可以采用这样的方式，如这个句型：
Only by coming to …can we enjoy the culture(atmosphere) of my campus/hometown/China.
6月英语四级作文参考范文：关于中国
【写作真题】
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following question. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to China, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
【参考范文】
Beijing—Must First See Place in China
If one of my foreign friends is coming to China, no doubt, I will take him to Beijing first. The reasons are as following:
First, Beijing is the capital of China, an energetic city with a long history. Beijing is a super large distribution center, high-quality goods across the country will appear here, so you can easily find whatever you like. Second, there are a great number of tourist attractions and historic sites in Beijing, such as Forbidden City, Tiananmen Square and Summer Palace. What is more, some of these interesting places are within walking distance, so you can visit several scenic spots by spending a relatively less time. Third, the traffic in Beijing is very convenient and inexpensive. You can take bus or subway train to anywhere you want to go.
206月英语四级作文范文(文都版)
英语四级作文题目：
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is coming to visit your hometown, what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
英语四级作文参考范文：
I like to take him to visit to Beijing ,the capital city of China. Beijing is steeped in culture ,with a history of 3000 years .There are loads of monuments, in Beijing , like the fobidden city,the great wall and the summer palace . I am totally fascinated by its culture 。
I went to Beijing when I was in my primary school ,but it did not leave me a deep impression . Because I was too young to understand the Chinese historical culture and it was difficult for a littlechild to be interested in it. I just felt the weather in Beijing was hot ,also very dry and the roast duck was really delicious.But now I regret for not learning the knowledge of cultural heritages in Bejing at that time.I am planning to study abroad and I want to introduce a lot of interesting Chinese culture to foreigners . But in fact I do not know it clearly ,even many foreigners know more things about Beijing than I know . It makes me feel kind of embarrassed。
So I am looking forward to paying a visit to Beijing and looking around all the monuments in Beijing . I hope I can learn some valuable things about chinese history. Then I can recommend this city to my foreign friends . It is not a city only full of skyscrapers, but also an ancient capital filled with time-honored traditions 。
6月英语四级作文
Which Is More Important
As can be seen from the picture above, there is a conversation between a son and a father. The father told his son that it is more important to empty the dustbin than to worry about disposing of nuclear waste, that is to say, small things go first when dealing with big things. I’m definitely on the father’s side in this and I’m sure I’m not alone.
A case in point is the successful launch of ShenZhou 10 spacecraft, which excites everyone and makes every feel proud of China. Behind this great event there are a host of detailed things, called petty things, conducted by millions of scientists, who have devoted themselves to the mission. It is the petty things that contribute to the success, which reminds us of the significance of small things. We also take ourselves for example. It is acknowledged that before running we must learn to stand and walk building up a solid foundation for running. Although walking is considered as a trifle while running is treated as a great thing, walking is the first step.
As an old saying, One can’t Make a By Success without Bing Self reliant. So we should keep it in our mind that before accomplishing important tasks, perform small tasks. Only in this way can we make the highest eminence.
My View On TV Shopping
Nowadays, with the fast development of mass media networks,
people are experiencing unprecedented convenience of handling daily matters.
TV shopping programs, for example, have made shopping so simple that it has become a fashion and trend that we can hardly resist.
However, everything can be a double-edged sword and TV shopping program is no exception.
TV shopping has its advantages.
Firstly, it is very convenient for consumers to make their purchase without going out and walking wearily from one shop window to another.
Secondly, compared with paper advertisements,
TV shopping programs show us the goods more vividly. When it comes to disadvantages, it seems that we, as consumers, can hear and see what is presented, but stand a narrow chance of knowing for sure what the goods are really like, and sometimes these salesmen just sweet talk us into buying what we do not need or something of poor quality. While making good use of TV shopping programs, we should be rational about what is advertised on TV and spend our money in a reasonable and cost-effective way.
生活的意义与目的
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying ”The meaning of life is to find your gift, the purpose of life is to give it away." You can cite examples to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考范文：
The Meaning and Purpose of Life
Everyone may encounter a scene when he or she wonders what the meaning and purpose of life is. Answers to this question vary from person to person. As for me, I agree with the view that the meaning of life is to discover your gift and the purpose of life is to make the best of it.
On one hand, one’s gift could be the source of his inner happiness, providing spiritual impetus and correct orientation. Take the world-renowned Chinese pianist Lang Lang as an example. His gift was noticed before he was 3 years old, which laid the foundation of his glorious life. On the other hand, proper use of talent helps people to realize their value in a positive way, thus making contribution to the society as a whole. For instance, Isaac Newton made a universally amazing discovery by digging into his gift and finding the Newton’s law of gravitation.
In conclusion, let’s search for our true gift and utilize it to the fullest to achieve a happy and valuable life.
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的'优点之二). But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法). (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to
话题作文：
这个模板的中文大意是：在某种场合，发生某种现象，并提供一些相关数据，然后列出这种现象的三个原因，并将三个原因总结为一个最主要原因，最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法，总的来说，利用这个模板写英语作文，是相当容易的，您只要将适当的内容，填写到对应的方括号中，一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。
Nowadays, there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合]. It is estimated that [相关数据]. Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. Besides, [原因二]. The third one is [原因三]. To sum up, the main cause of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因]. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing, [解决办法一]. On the other hand, [解决办法二]. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某种现象].
1.春节你 你相亲了吗
每逢春节，单身狗回家总是免不了一些唠叨，其中最狠的就是：有对象了吗？从几何起，被禁止早恋的我们却在毕业之后甚至未毕业被家长以“单身可耻”的罪名被逼相亲，而且相亲很多时候都未能如意，但若遇上看对眼的，也是一种幸运。
作文题目：Blind Date
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic 'Blind Date'. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.相亲在中国已演化成一种潮流；2.人们对此的态度；3.我的看法。
参考范文：
Enjoying popularity across the whole society, blind date is becoming more common and acceptable in China today which appeals to countless people. However, for it, people's views differ.
According to a recent survey, young people are found quite positive about blind dates. They believe that blind date can help them experience more, make new friends, etc.
Even though most blind dates will not develop into romantic relationship that people search for, it still is an effective way for us to meet more people. However, some people think differently. They argue that people who go for blind date may value materials more than the personality. For instance, a girl may like to date a wealthy guy rather than a poor one.
To sum up, despite the above negative views on blind date, I still think it is a good way for the youngsters to socialize.
2.提升学习效率
作为学生，我们自然以学 下面，就来看看一篇关于如何提升学习效率的文章吧。
作文题目：How to Study Efficiently
参考范文：
As students, we have to study almost every day. However, not everybody knows how to study efficiently.Do you want to know better about it?
There is some relationships between the study efficiency and the hours spent in studying in a day.In fact, more hours of study do not necessarily result in better or higher study efficiency.It is said that the optimum of efficiency comes when one studies about 5 hours and the efficiency begins to drop as he studies longer than it. By the time when one studies 11 hours per day， his efficiency of study becomes very poor.
In conclusion, there is always a maximum of efficiency and an appropriate amount of time for study in a day. More time spent in study doesn’t always mean greater efficiency.
3.听VS说孰轻孰重
这个世界上有着形形色色的人，有的人夸夸其谈，有的人不善言辞，然而善于倾听；很多人潜意识里认为能说的人更会被重视，然而，其实，有时候，善于倾听比能说更重要呢！
作文题目：Listening is More Important than Talking
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Listening is more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of listening. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
It is quite important to be a good listener.Effective listening is more than simply avoiding the bad habit of interrupting others while they are speaking.It’s being content to listen to the entire thought of someone rather than waiting impatiently for your chance to respond.
Slowing down your responses and becoming a better listener aids you in becoming a more amiable person.As you wait for the person you are communicating with to finish,as you simply listen more intently to what is being said,you will feel more relaxed,and so will the people you are talking only will being a better listener make you a more patient person,but it will also improve your relationship with others because everyone loves to talk to someone who truly listens to what they are saying.
It is quite easy for you to be a better listener.As long as you for get yourself and imagine yourself in the speaker’s experience to understand the emotion behind the words,and then give your appropriate responses slowly,you will be an endeared listener.
4.论校园里的金钱挥霍
如今的大学生的`花销越来越高，因为有家里的经济支援，有不少大学生对金钱的使用毫无概念，铺张浪费现象比比皆是，
但是其实，花的钱并非自己挣得，是父母辛辛苦苦的血汗钱，所以，还是需要多少节俭一些的。
作文题目：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)很多大学生每月的花销越来越高，根本没有节俭的概念，
2)分析产生这一现象的原因，
3)我的看法。
参考范文：
Extravagant Spending on College Campus
According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise. Many college students have no concept of thrift in their mind. They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society. This extravagant spending is primarily caused by the following factors.
First of all, nowadays most of the students are the only children of their families. They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money. In addition, with the improvement of living standards, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children. Moreover, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tend to need more money. Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.
From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty. We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices. The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.
5.如何解决大城市的用房问题
大城市生活固然好，然而房子却总是一个问题。暂不提房价高吧，有些人可能都有着没地方住或者不够住的烦恼。那么在大城市，如何解决这些住房问题呢？
作文题目：
How to Solve the Housing Problem in Big Cities
参考范文：
The shortage of housing in big cities is one of the most serious problems of modern living. Increasing numbers of people are finding it difficult to conduct normal family and work duties because they either have nowhere to live or their houses are inadequate. This is a problem that requires an urgent solution because it leads to social unrest and economic inefficiency.
Some people suggest that the solution to the problem is to build more high-rise apartments, others are in favor of underground housing areas. I prefer the first idea, because it is cheaper to build above ground than below. Besides, people prefer to live in the open air and see the sunshine.
The second idea is not practical. One reason for this is that it is dangerous to construct living places under streets and buildings. Another reason is that it would take too much time to carry out, and in the meantime the number of people waiting for houses would increase, thus making the problem worse.
6.独生子女的利与弊
随着国家的二胎政策的公布，也许在不久的将来，独生子女就成了少数群体了。在还没有二胎成群的时候，我们一起来看看作为独生子女有哪些利与弊吧！
作文题目：
Advantage and Disadvantages of Being an Only Child
参考范文：
My father used to talk to me about his five siblings. He used to say that I was unfortunate that I had none. And I used to envy him and wonder how nice it would be to have a houseful of brothers and sisters. I also used to wonder what would happen to me if I were to lose my parents. Frankly speaking, I do not have to share anything with anybody. I own all my parents' love. I can ask for anything I want. I always wear new clothes and eat the best food. Since my parents spend all their money on me, I can study at the best university of the country.
Lucky as I am, I now and then feel very lonely and I have nobody to complain about my loneliness. How I long for a quarrel with my brothers and sisters! Of course I have classmates and friends, but they are different. Sometimes I feel so pessimistic that after my parents leave the world, I will have no blood relatives left to share with me the fond memories of my parents. Furthermore, I am likely to become selfish while I realize the world is for sharing.
So, I am happy but lonely; I am fortunate but piteous; I am loved but spoiled; I am well-bred but selfish, because I am the only child of the family.
1)目前很多中国学生出国留学，
2)出国留学的好处，
3)我的看法。
【参考范文】
Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying astriking popularity among adolescents. Importanceshould be attached to studying abroad. There are a great many advantages of studying overseas. First and foremost, living andstudying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world. On a university campus,international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries andareas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is thebest opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity toimprove second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken. Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhapspainful, the payoff is worthwhile. In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseasstudents can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have.Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to thegrowth of adolescents.
(I)说明原因型
模块(1)
Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX .
注释：
(1)用具体数据说明XX现象(2)原因一(3)原因二(4)原因三(5)指出主要原因
(6)解决建议一 (7)解决建议二
Generation gap between parents and children
Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentages of parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).
Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows . The first one is that ( the two generations,having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) . Besides(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas ).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each other) .
It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .
(I)说明原因型
模块(2)
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ).
The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially when ( 6 ) .Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remind people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like ( 8 ).
The impact of Television.
In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.
The factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ).
Moreover , ( the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) .
Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply .
(I)说明原因型
模块(3)
For most of us today ,(1).From above ,we can find that the reasons why (2) are as follows.The primary reason ,i think, is (3).Second,(4).The third reason, actually ,is (5).The significance for (6) ，
Therefore ,(7).
注释：(1)人们针对XX的态度和举措(2)归纳现状(3)第一个原因(4)第二个原因(5)第三个原因
Teachers are the shapers of human souls. I still remember how my teachers pulled my through a critical moment. I did a bad job in the first preparation test for the entrance examination and I was considerably depressed. Then my teachers came to my rescue. Patiently, my English teacher analyzed the paper word by word and encouraged me to carry on My Chemistry teacher also gave me a precious gift. He told me not to be obsessed with the test results and encouraged me to find fun in learning. Their help enabled me to survive the competition and will surely benefit me in the future.
Perhaps I’ll never have a chance to repay all that I have received from my teachers. But I’ll try to be a useful person and become their pride
6月四级英语作文万能句子
①强调句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由with或without引导的短语。如：
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
③分词短语。如：
Satisfied with the result，He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒装句。如：
Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.
⑤省略句。如：
If so，victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess.
〔修正〕After a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的'句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。
4.学会使用过渡词。如：
①递进： then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。
②转折： however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等。
③总结： finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)， in conclusion(最后)等。
④强调： indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)等。
⑤对比： in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比较： similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如：
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如：
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
爱情是人类世界永恒不变的话题。有人说缺少爱情会让生活索然无味，而有些人却认为，爱情让人变得盲目，缺少理性。爱情更是大学校园的敏感话题。
Love in College
As a college student, campus is our home, a warm and sunny house, you can find the vigor to live and sustain for ever. But do remember there is unusual scenery you should pay great attention to, that is the love in the campus. When it comes to this theme, various words rushed into my mind, sweet, happy, love for ever, everything sounds to be wonderful.
However, our elders always exaggerate about love in college. They believe that it is a waste of time and money. It will make students to forget their studies and eventually may even destroy their lives.
As for me, although I am looking forward to having an excellent boy study and live with me, it is just a dream actually.① We are still children, do not have enough experience in love; we do not take in the spirit of true love.② For us it is just a good feeling, a slight feeling because of well-dressed or handsome appearance, not by instinct. How about the personality or her habits, we do not know, we just love because of her beauty. Love depending on this will certainly go not so further, one day, you find you two are unable to share in the same way, you will quit, leaving tears fallen down. It turns out that love in the campus is commonly short and dreamful.
I think after you become mature enough, then you can use your sharp eyes to recognize people, find who you really suit to, then, take it seriously.③
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行文点评
本文遵循总分总结构模式对校园爱情这个话题进行了分析和阐述。第一段引出话题，第二段列举长辈的意见提出对校园爱情反对的观点。随后在下一段中作者又进一步提出自己对校园爱情的看法。最后一段作为总结，提出希望和建议。
文章结构精巧，论证有力，正反对比加强了论证的效果。段落之间运用了however，as for me 这样的过渡词使文章思路更加清晰，一目了然。certainly, seriously这样的词汇更使作者的态度鲜明确定。文章使用口语体的形式，所以在一些连接词的使用上没有过于遵守语法规则，这一点需要注意。
好文妙译
校园爱情
作为一个大学生，校园就是我们的家，是充满温馨和阳光的大家园，在这里我们活力四射，朝气蓬勃。但是，别忘了，你也应该注意到有这样一道特殊风景正在悄悄蔓延，那就是校园爱情。每当提起这个字眼，各种美好的景象不禁使我浮想联翩，甜蜜，幸福，一生一世，所有这一切听起来都如此美妙。
相反，长辈们却总是过于夸大大学里的爱情。他
而对于我来说，尽管也期待着有个优秀的男孩相伴，一起读书和生活，但这只不过是一个梦罢了。我知道我们还都只是稚气未脱的孩子，缺乏恋爱的经验，我们并没有领悟爱情的精髓。爱情对于我们来说，可能只是一种好感，一种受穿着和外表吸引的微妙情愫，并非出于本性。关于对方的性格喜好我们一无所知，我们只是倾心于她美丽的容颜。这样的爱情并不会长久，直到有一天你终于发现你们再没有任何共同点，于是你们选择放弃这段感情，并为此黯然落泪。于是校园爱情往往只是短暂的梦幻。
我认为，只有真正走向成熟以后，你才具备足够敏锐的眼光去认识别人，最终找到真正适合自己的另一半，然后珍视你们的感情。
词汇斟酌
vigor n. 精力，活力
sustain vt. 维持，持续
scenery n. 风景，景色
exaggerate v. 夸大，夸张
instinct n. 本能，直觉，天性
personality n. 人格，个性
佳句临摹
①【注释】look forward to期待做…，盼望….
【临摹】They are looking forward to her visit.他们在期待着她的来访。
②【注释】take in理解，吸收
【临摹】We couldn’t take in the meaning of the word.我们无法理解这个词的含义。
③【注释】take sth. seriously严肃对待…，认真看待…
【临摹】You should step away from the video games，and take your study seriously.你应该远离电子游戏，认真对待学业。
思如泉涌
Love me little, love me long. 爱不贵亲密，贵长久。
Love is blind. 爱情是盲目的。
2016年6月英语四级作文写作技巧
开头部分
Many people insist that...
很多人坚持认为。
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that...
随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为。
A lot of people seem to think that...
很多人似乎认为。
引出不同观点：
People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that....
人们对。的观点因人而异。有些人认为。然而其他人却认为。
People may have different opinions on...
人们对。可能会有不同的见解。
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.
人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
There are different opinions among people as to...
关于。 人们的观点大不相同。
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).
对(失败)人们的`态度各不相同。
结尾部分
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that...
把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论。
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论。
Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that...
因此，我们最好得出这样的结论。
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。
All in all, we cannot live without... But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之，我们没有。是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
提出建议：
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ...
该是采纳。的建议，并对。的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ...
毫无疑问，对。问题应予以足够的重视。
Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that...
显然，如果我们想做某事，很重要的是。
Only in this way can we... 只有这样，我们才能。
It must be realized that... 我们必须意识到。
预示后果：
Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that... will lead us in danger.
很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险。
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that...
毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，很可能会。
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是，应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。
友谊意味着什么(what does friendship mean? )
directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: what does friendship mean? you should write at least 120 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:
1.友谊是人生永恒的主题
2.友谊到底意味着什么
3..友谊的重要性。
there is no definite answer. an eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.
friendship is to our life what salt is to dishes. when you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help. we admire the great friendship between marx and engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling communism.
friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without it.
6月英语四级漫画作文
题目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should comment on the role of mobile phone in people's communication. You are required to write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
参考范文：The Role of Mobile Phone in People's Communication
The popularity of smartphones has exerted great influence on the way people communicate, so much so that an increasing number of individuals contend that face-to-face communication is being replaced by texts and images on the mobile phone.
There are more than one angle to consider this phenomenon. On one hand, it is pleasantly acknowledged that smartphones shorten the distance between families and friends. Even people from different sides of the globe can share pictures, feelings and thoughts through various types of apps on the phone, thus building a long-distance connection. On the other hand, as the picture warns us, too much smartphone addiction interferes with people's real-life communication. Statistics show that over 70 percent of face-to-face communication consists of facial expressions and body language, which is why people should stay away from mobile phones when they have the chance to actually talk and communicate with others.
In a word, mobile phones act as an appropriate platform where people can always stay in tough however long the distance is, but a wise man should know when to put down his phone.
亚健康
1、随着现代化的不断加速发展，全世界的物质生活水平不断攀升，但人们却日益受到“亚健康”这种不良状态的威胁。
2、亚健康的具体表现及在我国的蔓延程度(据调查，北京75%、上海72%、广州70%的上班族都处于亚健康状态)
范文：
With the modernization of the world, people’s standard of living has improved a lot. Then there appears a state of sub-health among people which poses a new threat to them.
There are some tpical symptoms for people who are in a state of sub-health. First of all, those who suffer from it often have a headache or backache. Secondly, they feel like having a rest frequently. What upsets us most is that, the situation spreading countrywide. As a result, more and more workers in big cities are harassed by it, with a percentage of 75 in Beijing, 72 in Shanghai and 70 in Guangzhou respectively.
Then how can we sovle this problem effectibely? Experts suggest that the best way to keep ourselves thealthy is to do exercises. It is also very important that people should form a good living habit, for example, getting up early and going to sleep early. Only doing so can we keep us healthy.
微信的影响
范文：
Wechat Conquers the World
Since the policy of Reform and Open in the last century, Chinese economy develops so rapidly. At the same time, the technology catches up with the world. The popular social communicational tool Wechat was created in China, but now it conquers the world and people is crazy about it.
The reason why people like to use Wechat is that the functions are all-sided. Before Wechat, the most popular social communicational tool like facebook though is creative, it has to download another software to better communication. While for Wechat, everything is simple, you don’t need to download another software. What’s more, you can pay and have the webcam with your friends. The comment that your friends give to you is more private, only the common friends can share. As it is so convenient, people say that they can do everything with a smart phone at hand.
Technology changes our life and people’s need promotes the improvement of technology. We use our wisdom and create the new things. We should be proud of us and show to the world that Chinese people are creative.
[6月英语四级作文题目]
Present In The Progression
Letting Life Unfold
Our lives are guided by natural rhythms that are particular to each of us and cannot be altered by force of will alone. Life itself is a journey made up of processes and events that manifest before us only to be swept away when time marches on. Whether we envision ourselves creating a career, building a family, or developing the self, we instinctively know when the time has come for us to realize our dreams because all that is involved comes together harmoniously. When the time is right, the passage of destiny cannot be blocked. Yet as desperate as we are to touch these beautiful futures we have imagined, we cannot grow if we are not fully present in the evolutionary experience. The present can be challenging, uncomfortable, and tedious, but life unfolds as it will, and the universe will wait patiently as we make our way into the unknown.
The fate that awaits us is not dependent on our pace, which was preordained before we ever appeared in human guise. Therefore there is no reason to rush through life to reach those pinnacles of development associated with the paths we have chosen. Enjoying and fully experiencing the journey of life is as important as achieving goals and reaching milestones. There are lessons we can learn during those moments that seem immaterial or insignificant that we cannot learn at any other time. Appreciating these takes patience, however, because human beings tend to focus on the fulfillment of expectations rather than the simple joys of being.
Like many people, you have no doubt longed for a device that would give you the power to fast forward through certain periods of your existence. Yet haste is by its very nature vastly more stressful than serene fortitude. When you feel yourself growing impatient because the pace of your development is deceptively slow, remember that everything that will occur in your life will occur in its own time. Quelling your urge to rush will enable you to witness yourself learning, changing, and becoming stronger. There is so much to see and do in between the events and processes that we deem definitive. If you are patient enough to take pleasure in your existence's unfolding, the journey from one pinnacle to the next will seem to take no time at all.